The Red Scholar's Wake
Cool world, but the pacing was off for me. Feelings seemed to kinda just HAPPEN instead of evolving organically. This was most powerfully true for the daughter, whose affection for her Mama felt pretty contrived.
Original source versions
Cool world, but the pacing was off for me. Feelings seemed to kinda just HAPPEN instead of evolving organically. This was most powerfully true for the daughter, whose affection for her Mama felt pretty contrived.
Cool world, but the pacing was off for me. Feelings seemed to kinda just HAPPEN instead of evolving organically. This was most powerfully true for the daughter, whose affection for her Mama felt pretty contrived.